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    dots Submission Name: Infidelitydots
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    Author: Cirruculum
    ASL Info:    17/Male/SW Kansas
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 36/35/17
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 97
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       Hmm...I haven't been on in a while. Sorry everyone! I'll try to get on more. Until then, here's a poem that I wrote to hold you over.

    Have a good day,
    Cirruculum (JR)


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    dotsInfidelitydots
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    He professes his love

    But why should I compromise my heart

    For his need for self-worth

    And his obsessions for infidelities?

    To provide a shelter for low self-esteem

    Only making my heart empty

    Feelings of commitment have vanished

    Security of faithfulness has wilted

    My once opened heart is now closed by hurt

    Trying to keep the prisms of my family glowing

    While his guilt of unfaithfulness

    Empowers him to profess his love for me

    Why should I compromise my heart?





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      I sense you have written something that strikes close to home. Well, doesn't most any family have a romeo who doesn't care if caught in the act. Romeos don't really love with the heart. They have a "private" love.
    | Posted on 2008-02-06 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought you were older when you wrote this. And a girl. I think you captured the idea well, but maybe not so much as someone who's married who has been cheated on.
    Why should I compromise my heart for his need for self worth.
    I love this line. It's my favorite however most of this poem is wonderful and striking "prisms of my family glowing" I just love the symbolism. I woudn't change it at all. I really love this.
    pursuitoflife
    | Posted on 2008-02-05 00:00:00 | by Pursuitoflife | [ Reply to This ]


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