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    dots Submission Name: WRITTEN BY A 15 yr. Old SCHOOL KID IN ARIZONA :dots
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    Author: Druecilla
    ASL Info:    18/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 22/26/28
    Words: 304
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWRITTEN BY A 15 yr. Old SCHOOL KID IN ARIZONA :dots
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    New Pledge of Allegiance

    Since the Pledge of Allegiance
    And
    The Lord's Prayer
    Are not allowed in most
    Public schools anymore
    Because the word 'God' is mentioned....
    A kid in Arizona wrote the attached
    NEW School prayer :

    Now I sit me down in school
    Where praying is against the rule
    For this great nation under God
    Finds mention of Him very odd.
    If Scripture now the class recites,
    It violates the Bill of Rights.
    And anytime my head I bow
    Becomes a Federal matter now.
    Our hair can be purple, orange or green,
    That's no offense; it's a freedom scene.
    The law is specific, the law is precise.
    Prayers spoken aloud are a serious vice.
    For praying in a public hall
    Might offend someone with no faith at all.
    In silence alone we must meditate,
    God's name is prohibited by the state.
    We're allowed to cuss and dress like freaks,
    And pierce our noses, tongues and cheeks..
    They've outlawed guns, but FIRST the Bible.
    To quote the Good Book makes me liable.
    We can elect a pregnant Senior Queen,
    And the 'unwed daddy,' our Senior King.
    It's 'inappropriate' to teach right from wrong,
    We're taught that such 'judgments' do not belong.
    We can get our condoms and birth controls,
    Study witchcraft, vampires and totem poles.
    But the Ten Commandments are not allowed,
    No word of God must reach this crowd.
    It's scary here I must confess,
    When chaos reigns the school's a mess.
    So, Lord, this silent plea I make:
    Should I be shot; My soul please take!
    Amen
    If you aren't ashamed to do this,
    Please pass this on.
    Jesus said,
    'If you are ashamed of me,
    I will be ashamed of you before my Father.'


    Not ashamed. Pass this on.





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