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    dots Submission Name: Fuck My Rotting Corpsedots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 29/60/51
    Words: 258
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 101
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    Bytes: 1590



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    dotsFuck My Rotting Corpsedots
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    You can wear a crown of thorns
    and I could eat your pussy
    And you could fuck my rotting corpse
    cuz I am such a wussy
    And I lay in bed all night long
    Just thinking about your pussy
    It's like a wisp of cotton candy babe
    Bawling the eyesore blue

    I'd like to burrow in your cave
    Cuz then I'd know that Jesus saves
    But don't you let me down or leave me feeling blue
    Because Goddamn it, I love you

    I would forge a calf of gold
    For five seconds of mouth pussy
    I'll fuck you when you're decrepit old
    And smack that sagging tushy
    We don't have to bone you know
    I could just eat your pussy
    Lick the alphabet on your clit
    Cross the T's and dot the I's

    I'd like to burrow in your cave
    Cuz then I'd know that Jesus saves
    But don't you let me down or leave me feeling blue
    Because Goddamn it, I love you

    I know a girl with electric eyes
    She's got nails and concrete thighs
    I used to love her from across the room
    Until she shot me with a sonic boom
    And my mouth was standing open wide
    Absorbing all of the angels tide
    When she smiled it conquered my soul
    And then I knew I never had control

    I'd like to burrow in your cave
    Cuz then I'd know that Jesus saves
    But don't you let me down or leave me feeling blue
    Because Goddamn it, I love you




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    ||| Comments |||
      hmmm...
    this is sposed to be a love song?
    it sounds vaguely like one but i gotta say '[censored] my rotting corpse' is rather a turn off for a title... doesnt make me wanna read/listen to this piece [unless its heavy metal and well... then theres way too many words]

    i find it interesting the number of allusions to biblical references you have considering the nature of the song. i think that the golden calf and the crown of thorns etc etc are cemented by jesus saves in the chorus.

    have you ever heard tom waits?
    he has a song [that ive been listening to a lot lately] on the albm 'blue valentine' in which he seems to be singing a love song too




    i'll take a rusty nail and scratch your initials on my arm
    and i'll show you how to sneak up on the roof of the
    drugstore

    take the spongs from your wheelchair
    and a magpies wings
    and tie em to your shoulders and your feet
    i'll steal a hacksaw from my dad
    and cut the braces off your legs
    and we'll bury them tonight in the cornfield

    put a church keey in your pocket
    we'll hop that freight train in the hall
    and we'll slide down the drain all the way
    to new orleans in the fall



    its interesting the way people display affection toward others in words i guess...
    | Posted on 2008-02-06 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]



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