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DECISION = REACTION


Author: theman
ASL Info:    21/m/mn
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Words: 57
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Really confusing just thinking bout a few decision i have made in the past.someone might understand please if u do tell me wtf im writing about.


DECISION = REACTION


"For Every decision there is a reaction"


Gone but not forgotten
So much yet so little
Moved on yet stuck in blackness
Thinking about That decision
yet trying to block the images
Was i a fool
or was i doing what was need to be done,
I will never know
I broke my own heart.




Submitted on 2008-02-05 23:47:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Man, I have to tell you, I just didn't feel this at all.. I couldn't even undertand what you were trying to say. You should try to maybe word things a little differently or something. I don't know. I don't really have any advice on this one. To me, it's just kind of off the wall.

~zach~
| Posted on 2008-02-06 00:00:00 | by Big_Country | [ Reply to This ]


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