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    dots Submission Name: DECISION = REACTIONdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       Really confusing just thinking bout a few decision i have made in the past.someone might understand please if u do tell me wtf im writing about.


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    dotsDECISION = REACTIONdots
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    "For Every decision there is a reaction"


    Gone but not forgotten
    So much yet so little
    Moved on yet stuck in blackness
    Thinking about That decision
    yet trying to block the images
    Was i a fool
    or was i doing what was need to be done,
    I will never know
    I broke my own heart.




    Submitted on 2008-02-05 23:47:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Man, I have to tell you, I just didn't feel this at all.. I couldn't even undertand what you were trying to say. You should try to maybe word things a little differently or something. I don't know. I don't really have any advice on this one. To me, it's just kind of off the wall.

    ~zach~
    | Posted on 2008-02-06 00:00:00 | by Big_Country | [ Reply to This ]


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