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    dots Submission Name: should have said nodots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 237
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 642
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1441



    Description:
       i just found out my boyfriend cheated on me yesterday.. n last week it happend n i new from the day it happend i didnt want to think about it i wanted to push it all aside i dont understand where i went wrong.. guess it was cause i wouldnt give him nothing so he had so sleep with someone. its pretty fuckd up


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    dotsshould have said nodots
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    should have said no
    you should have said no

    you should have gone home

    you should have thought twice

    now look at we're at

    i dont know what to think

    i dont know what to do

    i want to kill her

    then hit you in your nuts

    you didn't think at all

    now look at what its cost

    was it really worth it?

    was it all worth what your making me feel?

    its just not fair to me

    to have to be here

    wondering why

    and what i did wrong

    you said right to my face

    none of this was true

    to turn back on your word

    and say i lied to you

    how do you feel?

    was this really worth it?

    now you might lose me?

    yeah you might really lose me for good.

    you should have said no

    i wouldnt do this to you

    why'd you to do to me

    please tell me why you did it

    i aint sorry i didnt give

    nothing up to you

    im happy that i found out who you really were

    now im so confused

    on what im gonna do

    whyd you have to do this

    was it really worth it?!





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