Description: Everything seems to be goning down hill as my ex moves on and i am left behind with my emotions and my broken heart
Lost moments -------------------------------------------
Without your touch my warmth is gone
As is my heart and soul
Our memories and moments
(Though so dear to me)
Haunt my nights with cold
When my pain finally ceases
And my broken life is healed
I will only wish for our moments
Which are lost and filled with fear
I can still feel your light kiss
As you pressed your lips to mine
And your soft lingering fingertips
Are always close to mind
But I will hope for our lost moments
As the tears fall down my face
And I will long for your endearments
Which may never find their place
Our together has come to an end
And with that I must bid my adue
But my heart is still with you
As is my tattered soul
And you still have my forever
AS our lost moments are silently torn
This was written very well. I loved it. I know exactly where you're coming from. My ex moved on before we even broke up. Three months later, he's still the object of my affection. It sucks, doesn't it? Anyway, the poem was great, consistant rhyme, good flow, but at the end I kind of stumbled. Somewhere around the last four lines. I'm not sure why, I think it ceased to flow as well as the rest of the poem. Other than that is was great. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading
Submission Name: Lost moments
