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    Author: Jordan Arema
    ASL Info:    16/M/U.S
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 8/4/2
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Death
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       This is a poem, if you can call it that, to a man I knew he died today. He was a man who made me want to be a better person. Cole, this is for you.


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    I don't know where to begin,
    I'm writing this for you.
    I'm can't belive this happened,
    It still seems like a dream.

    So young, so full of ideas,
    So ready to start, but not yet begun.
    Never able to begin.

    This loss is too much,
    I don't know what to say.
    You meant so much to me.
    I just want you to know.

    You changed my life.
    You made me look at things in a different light.
    I don't know how to say this, but
    I am proud to have known such an amazing person as you.




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      Wow it's a very sweet peom. Brought tears to my eyes. I can relate to this as I had a friend die when I was younger but it always sucks. One day the light won't be so dim in the mean time live in his memory.

    God Bless
    ~Kat
    | Posted on 2008-02-07 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]



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