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    dots Submission Name: Just Leave Medots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 84
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 918



    Description:
       This poem is dedicated to a man who means a world to me. I love you.


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    dotsJust Leave Medots
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    You are leaving tomorrow
    And what should I do?
    Just sit there quietly
    Or admit that I love you?

    Will I even make it?
    Have time to say goodbye?
    Am I gonna be late?
    When you're gone will I cry?

    What's the matter with me?
    Am I losing my mind?
    For a man who doesn't care for me
    I'm really going blind.

    So tell me what should I do?
    Because I can't think of anything.
    He is leaving tomorrow,
    I feel like I'm losing everything.

    I don't want to say goodbye,
    I don't want you to go,
    But I know it's the path you chose,
    And I will choose it too.

    We shall meet again,
    On a nice and rainy day,
    I will say "I love you",
    And the sky won't be gray.

    Anymore.




    Submitted on 2008-02-07 10:00:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like how you dont just say how your feeling you put it into a question to see if its real, i like that it wasnt completely hopeless that you do feel like you will meet him again someday. the hope made it stand out from other poems like this because everyone always writes about how they'll never see the person they love again but you believe that you will, that makes it stronger.
    | Posted on 2008-02-07 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]



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