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    dots Submission Name: Born Killerdots
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    Author: Megsrus aka Meg
    ASL Info:    15/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 9/63/39
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsBorn Killerdots
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    I stand in the middle
    Of a brand new bloody dawn
    My heart is slowly dieing
    And my soul is already gone
    I've seen so much and done too much
    Hear the screams on every wind gust
    My emotions are disappearing
    As I have left them to rust
    I kill and kill and kill and kill
    Each and every day
    It was what I was made for
    It is my only way
    Because I was born a killer
    And a killer I will stay




    Submitted on 2008-02-07 17:25:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very emotional and I could sense some anger
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      Again...wow! Of course I do prefer the dream-like quality of If Trees Could Talk... but this one also seems to have a dream-like quality...but more of a nightmare. It makes me feel like the person it tells of is out of control, but in a way he doesn't wish to be. I like it, its got good flow. Amazing. :D
    | Posted on 2008-02-29 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. Some people might find it a little creepy, but I like it. A lot. I agree with scardnscared. It would be a great theme song. Not necessarily for Dexter, but I have never watched it. I would try to put it to music if I were you.
    Keep writing.
    :]
    Katherine
    | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by Katherine_Music | [ Reply to This ]
      this may seem odd but this should be the theme song for the show dexter because the entire time i was reading it thats all i could picture. great write.
    | Posted on 2008-02-07 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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