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I Can't Promise
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I Can't Promise
I can't promise that love is real
Or tell you that it never goes away
All we have is this moment
And the memories we make today
I can't promise you'll never hurt
But I'll be here when you cry
There'll always be a question
But all we have to do is try
I can't promise you'll always be blissful
And that there won't be tough times
But I can assure you that I'll try to make it work
If you just assure me that you're mine
I can't promise you won't get tired of me
Or I won't become annoyed with you
But I think we could make the best of things
If we have the conviction to see it through
I can't promise you won't be tempted
But I'll never be led astray
The time may come when we'll grow apart
But we'll be here for this day
I can't promise that I'll be perfect
But I'll do the best that I can do
You can see inside my heart
And I could fall in love with you
Submitted on 2008-02-07 17:50:13
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This was written very well. I loved it. It flowed well and the rhyming was consistant. Perfect. I ave a poem similar to this to my ex, he didn't care. Hope everything goes well for you!! Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading
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