There's something different about those moments
In which you're drifting off to sleep
The world seems so much clearer
And the thoughts come from so, so deep
There's almost something surreal
About the touch of sheets against your skin
The warmth of breath against your pillow
Sensations equivalent to sin
There's something sweeter about the music
That drifts into your ears
The words have so much more power
The meanings are undeniably clear
There's absolute perfection
In the thoughts that flit through your mind
Every second has a deeper meaning
As you leave reality behind
There's something different about those moments
In the Sandman slowly creeps
As your eyes gently close
And you glide into a blissful sleep
How true is this, on a very literal sense I found it handy to keep a pad of paper and a pen next to the bed because I swear that there is a brilliant idea waiting to be born in those minutes before you fall asleep,
I like it,
Thanks,
Spin
nice story and excellent structure and rhyme scheme! You have great talent gal! One actually feels that mystic mood that comes over one just when drifting off to sleep!
Sorry I haven't been by more often! I have a tendency to come on for short periods, as I usally take a short break from running the business to come here and check posts.
I love this peom. It has a really good flow to it and the message speaks the truth. Some many ideas come to your mind as your drifting off to sleep. I really enjoyed it. Good Write
Submission Name: Perfect Slumber
