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    dots Submission Name: needing sustenancedots
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    Author: andnow
    ASL Info:    19.f.wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 136/135/42
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 665
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 108



    Description:
       very short. i like it like this.


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    dotsneeding sustenancedots
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    if driven down empty our day love,
    i rise loudest only smoking belief,
    making fuller any calm.




    Submitted on 2008-02-08 01:22:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is cryptic. there is no almost about it. i struggle to find any sense in these words.
    i guess it holds meaning and understanding for you though which is why you like it as it is.

    i like the idea of smoking belief though i am not sure if that is your intention.
    | Posted on 2008-02-13 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this a lot kev.

    very concise.

    almost cryptic.

    and very much your own.

    write more damnit.
    | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by Sheakhan | [ Reply to This ]


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