This Letter Unwritten
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This Letter Unwritten
This letter was unwritten, unsigned and unsent, wishing I had told you how much you really meant. More than the sun means to the sky, more than a child or a sweet lullaby. More than it's wings mean to a bird, more than the words I love you are heard. More than the dreams of folks old and young, more than any song could ever be sung. More than your beauty so innocent and true... this is how much I really love you. |
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| Excellent right. Simple but right to the point. It kept my attention the entire time. I don't really think that you could change anything to make this better. There was a part that I had to go back and read because I read it wrong, and it confused me. "More than it's wings mean to a bird" The "it's" referring to the bird threw me off. I didn't see that at first. Keep writing. :] Katherine | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by Katherine_Music | [ Reply to This ] | aww this poem is perfect for the holiday. wonderfully written. | </3 lisa | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ] | Deep dude, I like it, nice idea and well written. | | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ] | This poem was so simple, yet beautiful. It was really sweet and romantic, and I loved it! | Best of luck and keep on writing! :) Eliza | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ] | |
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