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Submission Name: for bradly. dots

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Author:	narcolepsy
ASL Info:	19/F/Pa
Elite Ratio:	3.97 - 129/135/60
Words:	64

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	808
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	409

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for bradly. dots

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i thought i could see
the rest of my life
in your eyes
where'd you go?

can't you hear me screaming?

i thought it was me
infidelity stabs like a knife
tell me lies
it would be better not to know

my tears streaming...

i hate to love you
i love to hate you

i hate you even more.

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