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    dots Submission Name: for bradly.dots
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    Author: narcolepsy
    ASL Info:    19/F/Pa
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 129/135/60
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsfor bradly.dots
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    i thought i could see
    the rest of my life
    in your eyes
    where'd you go?

    can't you hear me screaming?

    i thought it was me
    infidelity stabs like a knife
    tell me lies
    it would be better not to know

    my tears streaming...

    i hate to love you
    i love to hate you

    i hate you even more.




    Submitted on 2008-02-08 07:33:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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