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    dots Submission Name: In the absence of reasondots
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    Author: TheBlackFairy
    ASL Info:    18/female/Caldwell
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 32/29/15
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIn the absence of reasondots
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    In the absence of reason
    There is a thought,
    A single glistening ideal strived for by many,
    A state of mind coveted by rich and poor alike,
    A dream.

    In the absence of reason
    There is a momentary void of peace,
    A lack of commitment,
    A haven from pain and strife,
    An escape.

    In the absence of reason,
    your heart speaks,
    itís voice echoes threw the emptiness,
    and from somewhere between right and wrong,
    you find love.




    Submitted on 2008-02-08 11:12:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ah, Dream, "the dream's the thing..." to quote a famous guy.... a marvelous suspension of reason. Paradoxically it is BECAUSE of reason that dream is so gorgeous and wonderful.... bravo.... bravo... bravo... michael
    | Posted on 2008-04-01 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great concept...

    I find that I prefer emotions rather reason myself. Emotions make dreamers, reason makes opportunists. It's as simple as that. Without dreams we are nobody. Also, as you pointed out really well, love leaves no room for reason and love is the most valuable thing in the world. In your own mind is the only place where you are truly free. Reality and reason build borders and limits.

    I enjoyed your poem and your point of view :)

    Keep writing

    ~*~P~*~

    | Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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