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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFirstdots
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    She has wings to fly,
    Right into my arms,
    And the first heart,
    To deal mine harm,
    But I love it every time,
    That it hurts,
    Because no matter what,
    She’s my---




    Submitted on 2008-02-08 13:35:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Poignant, Succinct.
    This would make a good Post Secret thing you know? Those little postcards that people write depressing stuff on and send anonymously? Is it bad that I laugh at every one of those? Maybe thats a post secret in itself.

    Sorry to ramble
    Josh
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by MC white | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this...what is says and what it could mean.
    You did a good job

    Denise
    | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]


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