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    dots Submission Name: Only Lovedots
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    Author: AnnaBullen707
    ASL Info:    14/Female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 16/48/48
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsOnly Lovedots
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    Swings rustle in the background
    Our cordial meeting ground
    Take in the air and watch the night
    Ensnare us all around
    Entrance us deep into the dark
    As spiders silk and dew
    So deep I cant tell near from far
    I cant tell me from you

    Two heart a beat set placidly
    As morning sirens sing
    Not parting till the sun could light
    Each watchful slide and swing

    Adrift in newfound waters
    This passion, lest we shove
    Our parting, never lonely

    No sadness

    Only love





    Submitted on 2008-02-08 19:52:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is great Anna, and the title is so fitting.

    A beautiful story condenced into a poem of love
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful, Anna! You have a developing talent that is remarkable, and write with confidence and skill!
    | Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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