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    dots Submission Name: let me go 2dots
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    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    26/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.27 - 63/298/259
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 569
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    Bytes: 1198



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    dotslet me go 2dots
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    im left here on the floor
    nothing left of what i was
    its all your fault
    its my tears on the ground
    all you do is frown

    (chorus)
    i want you to know
    i would give up everything to show
    i love you there no end to this now
    i cant do this anymore
    i want you to go

    i cant stand the sight of you anymore
    cause you have torn my heart and soul
    left me broken and shattered
    i want you to know i still do love you
    but now i cant live with you or without you

    chorus

    i have to let this go
    but you know im nothing without you
    what do i do im so lost without you
    but i have to let you go
    cause im falling apart

    how do i survive how do i continue
    when all i think of is you
    we will never be together again
    but still i want it so bad
    but that life is over as are we

    chorus

    its the end of you and me
    i just have to let you go
    i cant keep trying
    when everytime im dying
    i want you to go

    just let me go...





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      this is really good, can relate. great work
    | Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by Romantic Girl | [ Reply to This ]


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