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    dots Submission Name: Threedots
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    Author: Jester_Gesture
    ASL Info:    19/f/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 354/430/184
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 66
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    Bytes: 640



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    dotsThreedots
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    In the morning in the morning
    I will wake from dreams of
    your voice
    your voice

    there is always one thing
    there are always three words
    that echo
    that echo

    And I want to right now
    I need to more
    and more and more and
    say
    something, say
    anything, it's better than

    the fading silence.
    I think you're drifting away
    and I can't live with that.

    There is always one thing
    there are always three words
    that echo
    that echo

    "Talk to me."




    Submitted on 2008-02-09 03:22:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it. its a little difficult to get the rhythm down but its good. a lot of others will relate to this... jst tryting to get the other person to talk but dont you think youd have to talk as well. i dont know. keep trying. good write.





    tina
    | Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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