"The Time For Love" by Ron Cole

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Author:	Ron Cole
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Night time is the time for love
when all the world's at rest.
It's a time for fire and candlelight,
when lovers are at their best.

Whispered endearments tease the air;
lovers tenderly caress,
and hold each other passionately,
sighing with baited breath.

Soft shadows gently bathe,
yielding figures of sensual grace.
Lovers hold each other close
in passionate embrace.

Forgotten are one's daytime cares;
whether things are wrong or right.
We meet again and tenderly
make love in the still of night.

Ron Cole
January 2008

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  This reads very well and is very romantic. I loved all of "IT" but I especially found the last stanza very powerful. Always well done!

love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
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| Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  Well versed Ron. I think you have captired the sentiments of many people here. Night time is not just for burglars........it makes love even more sepecial and enthralling.

Well done again.

Frank.
| Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very nice! I love the sensual scene it sets in my mind- Falling into a night of warm intimacy with the one you love, leaving the cold world outside.
It also reminds me of a song that goes something like 'night time is the right time'.
Like your 'soft shadows' this poem gently bathes me in it's warm images of love. A very nice addition for Sweetheart's Day.

| Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
  Ron,

You so clearly write what so many can't begin to express. Taking the deep, inner-most feelings of those who desire so deeply to say, but always come up short (for varieties of reasons) when it actually comes down to it, and make it possible for them to say it - through your words...

See, I can't even express correctly how reading your words allows me an ability to see what I feel and rarely can say. And with that, I can use your words (of course giving you full credit) to say to the significant other what normally comes out stuttered & most often sounding sleazy instead of the romantic intent...

This is beautiful (as all your writes are) and, as always, touches me...

Lisa
| Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ]
  To add to your long list of comments, may I add that, this is one great poem Ron. Much enjoyed.
| Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
  it's beautiful to think of night as something soothing and puts a smile on your face.
i like the idea of you thinking of night in this way as for me,
it's my time to think, get creative, and just really appreciate the world and forget everyone.

Soft shadows gently bathe,
yielding figures of sensual grace.

the choice of words were perfect to me.

there were a few typos and grammatical errors, but it doesn't really matter when you got the point across.

Peace<3

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| Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]
  this is beautiful, their is honestly not just one thing i can say that i like about it because i like the whole thing.
| Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]
  it sounds so sweet. imagine real love. cool huh. a lot of people will like it. a lot will envy it. good write.

tina
| Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
  Your words were smooth as silk and added to the romance of the poem. No vulgarity but an understanding of the others needs leading to true passion and fullfillment. Privacy, seclusion unrestrained trust, real love!!
Jerilynn
| Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by Jerilynn | [ Reply to This ]
  There truly is a magic in night that draws the mind/feelings into passion (although I must be honest in saying daybreak's pretty nice, too). Your poem is worded gently enough for the most sensitive ears while being especially appropriate as Valentine's Day approaches. Well done, Ron!

You might want to add an apostrophe to "ones - one's" in line 13.

:-) Sharon
| Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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