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    dots Submission Name: Al a Modedots
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    Author: Sheakhan
    ASL Info:    20/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.61 - 148/153/66
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 104
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 838



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       BRYAN YOU SUNNUVA BITCH YOU DID IT! :D

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    dotsAl a Modedots
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    The craze is simple,
    bleed it out.
    The rage a temple
    to the drought.

    We all encompass these things
    the self religion: all a mode.

    But can we all be simple minds?
    Or merely dead cars on this road?

    I will be quizzically yours my love,
    springsummerwinterfall.

    But there are no treasons between us,
    as most lovers see.

    Believe you me:
    I turn words into villas
    that thoughts inhabit.

    And taste that upward escaping rain of insanity that tells our story to the sky.

    Conspicuously yours my love,
    the tempered steel of my heart
    and porous calamity,

    entranced,

    confused,

    belligerent,

    all a
    mode.




    Submitted on 2008-02-09 10:15:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ahhhhh, love. It is complex, but it feels sooooo good at times.
    | Posted on 2008-06-17 00:00:00 | by jkhutchings | [ Reply to This ]
      this has a lot of complexity... i dont even know where to begin trying to truly understand it

    the main things i can get out of this are confusion and affection

    somebodys pretty damn alluring there, huh

    but i love this phrase

    I turn words into villas
    that thoughts inhabit.


    is it a love for language??
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by andnow | [ Reply to This ]


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