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    dots Submission Name: Temptationdots
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    Author: DemonicInk
    ASL Info:    21/F/Gypsie
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 29/10/28
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 169
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 508



    Description:
       Something written bout someone very close to me, and very special


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    dotsTemptationdots
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    I lose myself whenever I'm with you
    Time slows down to just us two
    I cannot see anything beyond your view
    It's a whole new sensation for me too

    Scaring me, exciting me at the same time
    I don't know what to do
    I'd die without your touch
    Bringing turbulent calm within my mind

    When I'm with you, I forget to breathe
    My heart beats faster til I lose my way
    Should go, want desperately to stay




    Submitted on 2008-02-09 11:46:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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