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    Author: x-Kerry-x
    ASL Info:    18 F UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 5/8/25
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMemoriesdots
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    Sitting in slilence,
    Time just passes by,
    Thinking of all the things we have been through,
    Some memories make me happy,
    Others make me cry.

    I know you have done me wrong sometimes,
    But I too have caused my fair share of pain,
    I am sorry for all the arguments we did have,
    I am sorry for us acting untame.

    We were new into the relationship,
    Just kids some might say,
    We never experienced love before,
    So when we did we just acted stupid.

    We have grown up so much since then,
    We have created our lovely home,
    And two years of being together,
    We are still deeply in love.

    I now think of all the bad times,
    And know they were out of love,
    You mean the world to me Michael,
    Thanks for being there for me.

    Dedicated to my bf Michael Turner xxxxx

    21st Nov 07




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