I also liked the imagery and your choice of wording.
I liked how such a small simple poem had such a big message; similar to how such a small blade of grass can withstand the world.
i like it.
i just reminds me of a simple cute poem to tell a child.
which is very important to write for the people with very limited understanding.
i haven't commented in a long time, so i'm really rusty.
This is excellent, Jerilynn! I'm an ole country boy, so I can relate readily to this!! This poem not only has good rhyme and rhythm, but has a lighthearted philisophical message that is delightful!
Submission Name: Purpose
