very haiku-ish in feel and reduced syntax and all that technomologicalismical stuff.
i thought aussie was a desert? or perhaps you're talking about the queensland rainforests, eh? i'd like to go there one day, and perhaps snorkel/scuba dive around the great barrier reef... not too fond of sharks though (recently swam with a few unknowingly, until my friends told me to get the hell out fast... and i was like what... oh, those dark shadows? thought it was seaweed... oops)...
Interesting imagery. It gives a soft, nostalgic emotion without resorting to specific events. It's like a little peak into a memory. Very nice work, thanks for sharing!
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