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    dots Submission Name: Big Brotherdots
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    Author: Max Million
    ASL Info:    16/M/DRA
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 30/52/66
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 125
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 300



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       I know its not amazingly awesome, but its special to me.


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    dotsBig Brotherdots
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    We are separated by sea
    By nationality
    By blood
    By heritage
    By true family

    Yet, you are my big brother
    You were there
    You listened
    You defend
    You care

    At the end of the day, you are my brother
    My Big Brother




    Submitted on 2008-02-09 16:42:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I hope I see the meaning of this. We are all brothers who care for our fellow man. We donot have to have a blood bond to be related, just a desire to undersand and to stand up for someone else. That is what I see anyway and I like it also. It is simple but well put together. Thank you for sharing this, Jerilynn
    | Posted on 2008-02-11 00:00:00 | by Jerilynn | [ Reply to This ]


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