Dawn Breaks

Author: ashik Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50 /37 /31 Words: 42

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Dawn Breaks

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The dawn breaks through to clean the murk of night The sun peeks out from the sky Soaking up the dew of midnight’s troubles The dream of last night’s life seeps out of sight Silently creeping away for another night

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