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I’m a Person


Author: ashik
Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50 /37 /31
Words: 26
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I’m a Person



I’m a person
Feelings that hurt
I’m a person
Pride that kills
I’m a person
A mask a million
I’m a person
Hiding behind fear




Submitted on 2008-02-09 18:15:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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