Fool in a Box by ashik

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Submission Name: Fool in a Box dots

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Author:	ashik
Elite Ratio:	4.65 - 50/37/31
Words:	59

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	82
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	390

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Fool in a Box dots

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Run jump scared free sneer.
Trick trap freeze hold sneer,

Don’t let life go
Precious gift
Hold dear, press close to heart.

Run ~ wall
Jump ~ wall
Scared ~ wall
Free? Fool in a box demon sneers

Tricked ~ cry
Trapped ~ cry
Freeze ~ cry
Free? Fool in a box demon sneers

Submitted on 2008-02-09 18:16:21 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
Huh...interesting?
It's definitely very fluid, though I wouldn't say by way of thought.

Is the message something like: a lot of things may happen to you in life and you may end up in many places than you started before, but that's what life's about. Embrace it. ??

At least that's what I got.

Suven
| Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by Suven7 | [ Reply to This ]

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