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    dots Submission Name: Fool in a Boxdots
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    Author: ashik
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 50/37/31
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 82
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsFool in a Boxdots
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    Run jump scared free sneer.
    Trick trap freeze hold sneer,

    Don’t let life go
    Precious gift
    Hold dear, press close to heart.

    Run ~ wall
    Jump ~ wall
    Scared ~ wall
    Free? Fool in a box demon sneers

    Tricked ~ cry
    Trapped ~ cry
    Freeze ~ cry
    Free? Fool in a box demon sneers





    Submitted on 2008-02-09 18:16:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Huh...interesting?
    It's definitely very fluid, though I wouldn't say by way of thought.

    Is the message something like: a lot of things may happen to you in life and you may end up in many places than you started before, but that's what life's about. Embrace it. ??

    At least that's what I got.

    Suven
    | Posted on 2008-02-09 00:00:00 | by Suven7 | [ Reply to This ]



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