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    dots Submission Name: Knowdots
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    Author: forfila
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 354/310/188
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 697
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    Bytes: 434



    Description:
       A quick write, I dont really like the read, but I like the message.


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    dotsKnowdots
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    Know that, its not easy for an outsider either
    Know that I would love you no matter what
    You need not to anything to befriend me
    Know that I am not like others, I have known that most my life
    Know that I am sorry if I made it hard for you through this ride

    Take a breath
    I have found my barings, here as a friend
    You will never again have to face my negativity.





    Submitted on 2008-02-10 08:20:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This appears to have been a difficult verse to write, but it bears a message of generosity, and enduring friendship. It has a somber, sincere mood that is comforting, and makes one wish to extend a hand in friendship.
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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