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    dots Submission Name: Breathedots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    16/f/china
    Elite Ratio:    6.35 - 195/131/115
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 93
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1070



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    dotsBreathedots
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    And let out a sigh of relief
    Because you'll never know
    All I've done for you
    Even if it hurt you
    It was FOR you

    My pain
    ---your gain
    I was trying to save you
    ---could have saved you
    from this bitter cold which bites us
    ---leaves me in the dust
    I'll smile foryou
    ---Don't want to widen this lack of trust.
    Even though it should be
    Widened.

    These secrets are too much to hold
    Too much to bear on my naked back
    Me, lying, outstretched
    To warm up your space for when you get back
    IF you get back
    Because for now we cant put you back together again
    Because you're holding the intructions
    Behind your grinding teeth.
    Hold your tongue, your words are poisin, and bring me to tears.
    Don't. I want to hear it.
    I want to know.
    No matter how muffled your voice is
    or mine.
    It doesn't matter.
    You'll feel better after this.




    Submitted on 2008-02-10 09:58:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hi there. I like the flow of the peom. It brings deep though to memories shared. The humpty Dumpty line is clever to put together again and the reason why is innovating. You keep your mysterys wel.hidden. Keep going. Jachim.
    | Posted on 2008-02-10 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]



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