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    dots Submission Name: My accompanimentsdots
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    Author: Broken
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 139/137/36
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy accompanimentsdots
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    Dying within my own doom
    Suffocating in my own space
    Rejection upon neglect,
    Makes me want to escape far away.

    I know I am the only one to blame,
    and that all else will only prevail.
    If I let try, succeed and faith,
    Become my only accompaniments.




    Submitted on 2004-06-28 16:25:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, I am unclear as to what you are trying to paint here. It seems contradictory...you're saying that if you let try, success and faith become your only accompaniments you're gonna be defeated...I dont know. maybe im missing something. Good write anyways..

    -Bruno
    | Posted on 2004-06-28 00:00:00 | by brunov68 | [ Reply to This ]
      This really struck a chord with me. I understand it perfectly. The last two lines are the perfect desciption of someone crippled by clinical depression. I know that feeling so well.
    | Posted on 2004-06-28 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]



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