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    dots Submission Name: Skidoudots
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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsSkidoudots
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    You say
    And they say
    I can't love
    You made me feel as if I didn't deserve love
    But what is this feeling I get in my chest
    Everytime I think of you
    Your caress
    So sweet
    Yet so dark
    I know you won't say it back
    But I do mean it when I say
    I love you
    Skidou




    Submitted on 2008-02-10 22:59:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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