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    dots Submission Name: Sew My Heart Back In Placedots
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    Author: ULA
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 28/43/19
    Words: 388
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       so yea it's for no one in particular, just strummin my guitar and it appeared on paper. so here it is


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    dotsSew My Heart Back In Placedots
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    I know you think that I’m pretty,
    But will you actually take the to time
    To really get to know who I am.

    I’ve been used and abused
    For my good looks
    So many times
    I’m getting sick of it.

    I’m not looking for sex,
    I’ve had my fill.
    It just aint the same,
    Without love involved

    It’s awkward I’m lonely
    Which seems kind of silly
    Cause no matter where I go
    I’m never alone

    I need a compadre
    A Beyonce to Jay-Z
    A best friend a lover
    To cuddle under the sheets.

    I’m falling, I’m breaking
    I’m going crazy
    I need you to save me
    So take me away

    It’s just not the same without you
    Without you
    This isn’t the way I pictured it
    If I died right now I’d feel better
    Feel better
    But you ripped my heart out and threw it away.

    If this is a joke
    It’s not very funny
    You’re wringing me out
    And hanging me to die

    I’m miserable, monotonous
    I’m talking to my self
    I can’t see why you left me
    I going crazy

    I’ve lost sleep, I can’t eat
    Love’s an evil thing
    Look what it’s done to me
    Take the mirror away

    I’m losing, I’m fading
    I’m dying daily
    I need you to save me
    So take me away.

    I’m just not the same without you
    Without you
    This isn’t the way I pictured it
    If I died right now I’d feel better
    Feel better
    But you ripped my heart out and threw it away.

    It’s funny how things end
    The scars are done healing
    I’m feeling much better
    Now that I'm with her.

    She’s cuter, she’s smarter
    She’s twice the girl you are
    A best friend, a lover
    To cuddle under the sheets

    A compadre my Beyonce
    If I were Jay-Z
    If I am falling or breaking
    She’d be there to save me

    I’m just not the same when I’m around her
    Around her
    This is better than I ever pictured it
    And am so glad that I found her
    I found her
    She was the one to sew my heart back in place
    I love her so…




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    ||| Comments |||
      This was written very well. It flowed nicely and put music in my head. Fantastic. I know the feeling of the heart being ripped out, but not the feeling of it being put sewn back in place. I think I know how it feels though, from reading this. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

    »MIss MIsery«
    | Posted on 2008-02-12 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]



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