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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye Lullabydots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.86 - 252/248/195
    Words: 246
    Class/Type: Lyrics/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 130
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1555



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       I've changed a few words and rewrote the last verse. Tell me what you think.

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    dotsGoodbye Lullabydots
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    Look me in the face
    don't say a word
    I'm leaving here
    flying away like a bird.
    Times are changing,
    time to say goodbye
    Don't have to be around you
    don't have to listen to your lies.

    You thought you were in my heart to stay
    But what if i lost that heart someday?
    Unsure of where my heart is leading you.
    But it's too late I'm leaving you.

    Getting out of here
    away from this place.
    Never again will I
    have to look in your face.
    I'm getting away,
    never see you again
    I have to protect my heart,
    should of never let you in.
    You've hurt me so much already,
    I shouldn't even care.
    But it hurts me to know
    you won't be there.

    You thought you were in my heart to stay
    But what if i lost that heart someday?
    Unsure of where my heart is leading you.
    But it's too late I'm leaving you.

    Even though this hurts
    It's time for me to say,
    You weren't worth my time
    Though I thought of you everyday.
    Never again will I
    have to see your face.
    Cause I'm leaving here
    I'm getting out of this place.

    You thought you were in my heart to stay
    But what if i lost that heart someday?
    Unsure of where my heart is leading you.
    But it's too late I'm leaving you.




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