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    dots Submission Name: scoundreldots
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    Author: Aknahlij_d 1
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Loueezy
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 369/516/136
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsscoundreldots
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    When i start spitting, i expct the world to shut up and listen
    hope that they don't play themselves and pay attention
    did i mention, im the grusomest, ruthless, cut throat cannibal
    animal with 6 legs, still mammal though, pushing the envelop
    honest though, with honor, i slaughter fighters like dahmer
    clamer than time before storms, i keep the cold lukewarm
    so hot, i make the corpses stink worse
    im your worst nightmare
    ill kill the tough talk if you leave and pay the flight fair
    i don't like you gear, big beard, guitar or bald head
    you can suck it till your eyes are red
    and ill flee the scene, cheezing, wondering where they found you
    they call me ak the passion, and im a dirty rotten scoundrel




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