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    dots Submission Name: If God Were A Poet...dots
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    Author: DuelWithPillows
    ASL Info:    18/m/Tunisia
    Elite Ratio:    1.75 - 3/14/4
    Words: 320
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       A valentine's poem for someone sweet... i'm testing it out on this site before i give it to her... tell me what ya think


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    dotsIf God Were A Poet...dots
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    If God were a poet you would be His vision,
    Inscribed in honor of love’s ambition,
    And written amidst His composition
    Beauty is given definition.

    He would write about the starlight
    He created in your eyes;
    And how you are the silver lining
    In even the grayest skies.

    He would write about the radiance
    Emitting from your skin,
    And how the Father placed it there
    To outshine any sin.

    He would write about how proud he is
    Of you, His work of art,
    And how truly blessed He made me
    To be held within your heart.

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    If God composed a symphony you would be His choir,
    Striking every chord for sake of love’s desire.
    And the hymns that sing from heaven, adorned in holy fire,
    Are an echo of your voice; to astound and to inspire.

    He made the softest summer breeze
    As a mirror to your sigh,
    And the coldest winter showers
    In reverence as you cry.

    He designed the raging rivers
    To mimic as you laugh,
    And breathed life into the nightingale
    To sing on your behalf.

    God so loved His masterpiece,
    Your voice became a song.
    And with loving arms He holds you
    Amongst the stars where you belong.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    If God were an artist you would be His muse;
    His graceful flower from bud to bloom,
    And portrayed in holy gentle hue;
    You are engraved forever in Eden’s womb.

    You have the sweetness of a sunflower,
    And the passion of a rose.
    Like the petals of an orchid
    Your beauty overflows.

    As the iris you are elegant,
    And as the daisy you are kind.
    Though you are lovelier then the lotus
    My love for you is blind.

    Christina, to me you’re perfect,
    You define our Lord’s design,
    And as I am bound in your bouquet
    I thank God that you are mine.




    Submitted on 2008-02-11 19:36:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was so beautiful.
    Your love for this girl is apparent, and I really enjoyed reading this.

    :]
    | Posted on 2008-02-12 00:00:00 | by Cass | [ Reply to This ]
      One of the best poems I have ever read, the way you weave the threads, spinning with passion and skill.

    My jaw dropped! I wonder how it must have felt for the girl you made this for.
    | Posted on 2008-02-11 00:00:00 | by Nathaufein | [ Reply to This ]



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