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    dots Submission Name: All or Nothingdots
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    Author: Emmalee
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 471/456/138
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    Description:
        I wonder at times where I fit in. I think the truth of the matter is that nobody fits into anywhere, and the fact that we are individuals scares most people, what it comes down to is if you like and accept who you are don't comprimise yourself for anything or anyone


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    dotsAll or Nothingdots
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    Trying for the inner circle
    Going round and round
    in a whirlwind of distortion
    Head spinning like rims on a tire
    misled with no sense of direction
    locked in chains; whipped and tortured
    bathing in blood for a lost cause




    Submitted on 2008-02-11 21:42:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So much meaning in so few words, I didn't think it was possible. This is what I like to call a continuous piece, where meaning is added each and every time you read it, and this was a perfect example of that because of your choice of words. I too feel that life has a circular destructive pattern at times, but it is up to us to break this cycle with our creativity, the only unpredictable weapon we have. Maybe we can get time on our side then and gradually make a change.
    | Posted on 2008-02-11 00:00:00 | by 7makaveli | [ Reply to This ]



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