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    dots Submission Name: Icarian WIngsdots
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    Author: Nathaufein
    ASL Info:    16, Male, Dallas TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 3/4/8
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 77
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 413



    Description:
       Sometimes you just have to spread your wings and fly, but there are those who fly to high, and find the wax melted from their very wings. What woe to go so high and fall so far... Strive, but always be humble and virtuous.


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    dotsIcarian WIngsdots
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    When is a matter of who, and who is why.
    Given wings, take, things not to forsake.
    With them fall and crash, lose all to the ash.
    Fire is ire, something inspired, the wood your livelihood, no longer a would, but should.
    Water is of love, not anger the danger, a dove, the daughter of love, Spread your wings and fly.

    But fly to high, fall and crash, lose all to the ash.




    Submitted on 2008-02-11 21:51:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was very well written, unique. I don't usually read poetry stuctured this way but I definitely enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2008-02-12 00:00:00 | by Cass | [ Reply to This ]



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