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    dots Submission Name: My name isdots
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    Author: rawpot
    ASL Info:    24/M/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 383/256/84
    Words: 303
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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    dotsMy name isdots
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    My name is not hard to remember... but I do wear a T-Shirt that says "Remember my name, you will be screaming it later"

    A friend of gone times bought me that from Dubai; well he was there to make some money and that he did.

    I could have gone too, I was too arrogant and head strong to do anything of that sort... I am not upset, I am glad I was smart enough not to go there.

    Being me is not so easy... I am bit of a eccentric, wear formal clothing most of the time and I remain serious, polite mannered and often aloof that makes people feel cozy and almost like I am harmless.

    I was not like that all the time... I used to be very aggressive and always the go-getter sort.

    I had a girl friend, I screwed a company management, then I lost my girl friend, I lost a new job because I would not back up, then I started my own, went back to my older roots and was essentially aimlessly wandering around looking for ways to make money.

    Until now I have made some amount of money, but that is not sustainable.

    I need to find ways and means to make a lot more than I am earning right now... all the money I have will soon be exhausted and I will be hitting a disparate if I did not make enough.

    Ah, well what do I have to lose if I have nothing to keep... expect for my life and wandering deliberate nature of not being any good to any one... love me for what I am and I enjoy every thing I did... expect for anything that adds up to nothing...

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