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    dots Submission Name: Eye of the Day (Mata Hari lives)dots
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    Author: I_Bleed_Ink
    Elite Ratio:    5.54 - 180/174/51
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 587



    Description:
       Made a change or two, reposting for comments.

    Backstory:
    Mata Hari was a circushorse rider in Paris, an artist's model, and an accused double-agent using her womanly charms to get her way.

    ...Then she was put in front of the firing squad.


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    dotsEye of the Day (Mata Hari lives)dots
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    Parisian horses scream
    for the loss of a rider ethereal.
    Charcoal weeps for the muse
    too wicked to still.
    Sari drenched with regret,
    flesh greeting the chill.
    Ivory limbs clinging
    to sooty earth—
    gilded bangles silenced,
    bated as mudra trembles.
    Battlefields bloodied
    by the flick of your hip,
    the flux of your breath,
    the thrust of your will.
    Warlords heavy laden with lust
    sway from memory,
    un-reality tilts,
    legend remains
    as the mask
    cements.




    Submitted on 2008-02-13 00:24:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i remember reading about mata-hari... a femme-fatale spy, right?

    my take on this, coupled with your title, is a song, a prayer, for the exotic and unreachable, the adrenaline pulse of dangerous... fun. the innuendo is evident to me... very... thrusting in direction, yes.

    nice rhythms too. complements this piece.
    ~
    | Posted on 2008-02-13 00:00:00 | by silent strings | [ Reply to This ]


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