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    dots Submission Name: who to choosedots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswho to choosedots
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    in love but so lost
    my future vs my past
    everything in one hand
    nothing in the other
    love life lust
    pain, hate and disguise
    both significant
    both with its pro's and cons
    im going to marry the love of my life
    but what about my ex
    what about my first real love
    i miss him at times
    i miss the things we had in common
    i miss our love hate relationship
    but on the other hand
    i have everything ive ever wanted
    a guy who loves me unconditionally
    a guy who would die for me
    im going to follow my heart
    follow my dreams
    marry this guy
    nothing will come between
    but if i make the wrong choice
    hopefully he will be there to catch me





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      your getting better and better...this almost made me cry it means more to me than anyone on here will ever understand... i am glad your happy though you did make the right choice don't doubt it
    | Posted on 2008-12-31 00:00:00 | by brokenbylove | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a wonderful piece. I'm captivated by it. bravo bravo
    | Posted on 2008-10-17 00:00:00 | by babygirl09 | [ Reply to This ]
      i feel ya girl. and i like your peice. the message was to the point. the write itself would be better if you added different rhythm to it.
    | Posted on 2008-02-15 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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