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    dots Submission Name: Cruel Little Gamedots

    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 858
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 674

       Ahh this one isn't so good.. ohwell I guess I should go back to my older style >_< Read if you dare.. Enjoy

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    dotsCruel Little Gamedots

    What do
    want me
    to do?

    I swear
    to you
    I'll do it.

    Tell me
    what you
    want to

    I promise
    I'll say it.

    Please don't

    I'll do

    When you say
    you love me
    do you
    mean it?

    Or is it just
    some cruel
    little game?

    I don't know
    what to do anymore
    But I know I want you.
    Please help me

    Submitted on 2008-02-13 10:17:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Simple and strong. The message is clear and i can identify with the feeling alot. bravo
    | Posted on 2008-12-17 00:00:00 | by TheBlackFairy | [ Reply to This ]
      wow... simple. quiet simple. i think iut should have the name, cruel little game, but hey... that's me.... this reminds me of me, except freewritten... which is cool i bump with it, hey u wanna collab? I got sum ideas....
    | Posted on 2008-09-26 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this poem a lot. For me it's very easy to relate too. Simple but very much gets the point across. Well put.
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by Tidal33 | [ Reply to This ]

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