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    dots Submission Name: Speak!!!dots
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    Author: Tradia
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 13/28/26
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 149
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1059



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    dotsSpeak!!!dots
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    Do not stay silent
    Speak
    say those words
    shout them if you will

    Declare what you feel
    don't keep them inside
    show your wrath
    let me see your delights

    Do not put barriers
    let down your walls
    don't run away
    face the lies

    Speak!
    Yell!
    Let them know
    what you felt

    Say it's not right
    when they mock you
    stop the bullying
    with a howl

    Speak
    say what you will
    Say you love me
    say you hate me

    Speak silent words
    that hide in your heart
    Speak the truths
    that i know lie in your mind

    Scream,shout, cry
    dream, live
    love
    love me

    Speak
    say what you must
    say that you love me
    Speak to me
    speak to them

    Shy boy of seventeen
    do not stay quiet
    when i know your mind
    is filled with silent words





    Submitted on 2008-02-13 11:04:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it sounds like you're trying to get the attention of someone that either doesn't care, or doesn't want to. The format you used is not my favorite, but that's just a personal preference and not a criticism. there is a lot to like about it, and it does a good job of getting your thoughts across.
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by Raistlin Sith | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece was quite beautiful. I could feel the raw emotion behind it, and am indeed delighted to have come across it. And I understand the message behind it. Too many times we keep inside what we want to say/shout/scream/whatever and it saddens me that I am one of these people. Hopefully this guy will indeed say what words lie beneath his exterior. Great read/write.

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-02-13 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]



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