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    dots Submission Name: The People We Should Quotedots
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    Author: Suven7
    ASL Info:    20 female Fla
    Elite Ratio:    7.1 - 478/259/47
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1551



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       ...I really really do like quotes. Send me some good ones I could add to my collection.


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    dotsThe People We Should Quotedots
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    My heart is obsessed with seeking out quotes
    To ponder during my empty hours.
    I have ones from Duke Ellington and Aphra Behn,
    But none from Oprah; her show is entertaining
    But not exactly inspiring. I saw Bono in her
    Show once and he was inspiring. But the host,
    Not so much.

    I have ones from my history teacher and my
    English composition teacher, and the greatest
    Teacher of all: Bangsund. But blundering quotes
    From “stars” never make it into my blog.
    I know I won’t go to prison for libel or
    Slander; their reputations are that mucky
    Already. To incorporate their thoughts
    Into my vocabulary would be just
    Quite distasteful.

    I have ones from Dave and a book called
    Cry, The Beloved Country; I have ones from
    Kate Chopin’s The Awakening and Orson
    Scott Card’s Ender’s Shadow. But none
    From movies and T.V. shows – those I say
    Out loud and laugh over and make fun of,
    But they are not the stuff that can fill
    My empty hours.

    My heart is filled with worldly quotes and
    I am never satisfied. The voices of
    Dead authors and living teachers ring
    In my ears all day and they get me through
    But they never get me by.

    I ought to brush the dust off my Bible, and
    Leaf through its golden pages. My heart’s
    Obsession for quotes might just be a
    Manifestation of a hunger for the Word.




    Submitted on 2008-02-13 18:48:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
       I liked how you seperated the desires of your heart and of your mind. The heat does obsess about the Word and it's important everyone realizes that. You make a valid point here.

    As for critical analysis, this poem seems to lack an overall rhyming scheme. It's structure is unique but it could be refined. I like your vague/deep pieces of merit because they can potentially contain an infinite amount of meaning which applies to each person individually, allowing them to relate to the poem on a much more personal and inspiring level. This poem is interesting and insightful, but it specific and therefore I can't apply your inspiring thoughts on life to my own - I'm left to aplly simply what has been explicitly given...like the constitution and the judiciary.

    UGH! There :P

    In reality I think you're an awesome writer and I don't like being critical or pieces that deserve praise. You shouldn't make me be so antipatico.

    I love you!
    Andy - Olah

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    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by Olah89 | [ Reply to This ]
      "Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth."
    -Oscar Wilde

    Okay, so maybe it's not very inspiring but I like it anyways. I want a mask. :-0 Oh, the things I would say!
    | Posted on 2008-02-13 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ]



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