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    dots Submission Name: Dark Valentinedots

    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       this was made last year sometine i just finsished it this year.

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    dotsDark Valentinedots

    Blood is red
    The dead are blue
    What you said to me is not true

    I cry and cry
    Night after night
    I try and try
    To fight and fight

    Fight away the fears
    That are you fault
    Need someone to wipe away my tears
    And lock them away in a vault

    The oposite of what I've been taught
    To never show your feelings
    Look and see what you've wraught
    You keep me reeling

    Will you even catch me if I fall back?
    I would have expected that
    Long ago
    That's just not how you act
    This is my woe
    While love for me is something you lack
    No surprise you've sunk this low

    Submitted on 2008-02-13 21:53:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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