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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts of divorcedots
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    Author: Raistlin Sith
    ASL Info:    22/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 106/182/66
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       to no one in real life


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    dotsThoughts of divorcedots
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    I don't think you noticed
    what went on in my head
    every time I fucked you
    on that stained and dirty bed.

    I don't think you realized
    the speed in which I bathed,
    hoping that some part of me
    could get past you unscathed.

    I don't think you spotted
    the glazed look in my eye
    or the stench of booze I hid
    to keep living that lie.

    I don't think you understood
    the hate and rage inside
    every time I looked at you
    in my thoughts I cried.

    Every time you said a word
    my heart would turn to ice,
    adrenaline would start to pump,
    my mind locked in a vice.

    The thought of you would make me sick,
    I had to get away;
    if I'd made it through another night
    I'd be still dead today.




    Submitted on 2008-02-14 10:18:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      For being to no one, this holds a lot of venom. It moves the whole act of sex into a power/dominance act...one that can bring self loathing. Your last lines are like a hook to a song; a contidiction that makes perfect sense.

    jan
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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