What will the future hold for us -------------------------------------------
I saw you today and my heart had jumped
I wanted to race to your arms and tell you whats been on my mind
But pictures of the day you said you wanted a break was just racing in my mind
i constantly played with the idea with you being in my life once again
I want you to know about everything you've been missin
The last time we parted you told me that I'm your mission
But when you looked at me you didn't express that feeling
I long to be loved my you once again
I long to be held by you, I long to be by you
No words can explain what emotions ran through my mind
But what will the future hold for us if you give me a moment of your time to tell you what I feel
I liked it. It had a fast beat to it, kinda like a rap song. The part "I want you to know about everything you've been missin/ the last time we parted you told me that I'm your mission" especially sounded like a rendition of a song by 50 Cent or someone. The only thing is, next time maybe you should check your grammar/spelling. For example, "missin" could be missin', and in "i constantly played..." the "i" should be capitalized. Not a big thing; otherwise, great entry.
Submission Name: What will the future hold for us
