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    dots Submission Name: Pink Valentine dots
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    Author: PrincessOfDark
    ASL Info:    17/F/Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 22/31/25
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 907
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 415



    Description:
       Yuudia this is about you.


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    dotsPink Valentine dots
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    Love
    This overwhemling feeling of love
    I used to think I did not deserve love
    But you have changed that
    This is my Pink Valentine
    I know I hate the color
    But I cannot help how I feel about you
    You make me smile
    You make me laugh
    I haven't felt this way since we were last together
    Please stay with me
    And be
    My Pink Valentine




    Submitted on 2008-02-14 12:43:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Pink? other than the color i like it. even if it is about that damned samurai. he doesnt deserve you. but you love him...and as long as he doesnt hurt you i am fine
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by PrinceOfEvil666 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it Disa...*smiles lightly*
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by Aion Kiori | [ Reply to This ]
      Yuudia: Me?
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by Zadokya | [ Reply to This ]


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