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    dots Submission Name: Valentine's day Defence againts her Oppressordots
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    Author: Tradia
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 13/28/26
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 102
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1625



    Description:
       I read some Valentines poems and I wondered...if it was real..what would it say!


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    dotsValentine's day Defence againts her Oppressordots
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    Yes I sold myself
    Yes I have been raped
    turned into another
    marketed holiday

    Is it really all my fault?
    That cards show
    models in skimpy clothes
    and even a naked baby
    maybe Stupid roses
    and worthless chocolates

    I'm the victim here
    Not you or he or she
    You turned me into this
    a mockery of what I've always been

    I always was
    the innocent
    the toughtless
    maiden
    who let her manager
    get the best of her

    If am comercialized
    nothign more
    than a money making scheme
    to steal
    from foolish lovers
    who proffess every valentines
    It is not my fault!

    So do not be bitter
    Do not speak ill of me
    It is not my fault
    that no one wants you
    on Valentines

    I am not to blame
    that you turned sour
    Do not hate me
    Have some shame

    Who do you think you are?
    To commit a sin
    so wrong
    that if I was out of this poem
    I would sue you for

    I was raped
    turned into
    a marketed holiday
    Have some shame

    Since you helped
    everytime you bought
    a rose
    a chocolate
    a card
    a naked baby with a bow

    This is my defence
    Stop writing poems
    about my life
    about my disgrace
    have some shame'
    I am the victim here
    not you or he or she
    But I
    Valentine





    Submitted on 2008-02-14 13:28:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Have you ever read the history of Valentine's Day? The whole commercialized view is somewhat of an misunderstanding between scholars that was commercialized in the late 19th century by the sending of cards.
    The rest, as they say, was history.
    | Posted on 2008-02-14 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]



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